A " FOR AND AGAINST" COMPOSITION

Una opción para la Task 2 del Writing de B1 para EOI, puede ser una redacción sobre las ventajas y desventajas cualquiera de los temas especificados para este nivel.

Para los que estáis preparando Selectivo puede seros muy útil dominar este tipo de redacciones.

Os paso un modelo en el cual sólo debéis completar correctamente los huecos con los conectores siguientes:

as a result

besides

however

for example

in conclusion

the main advantage

on the other hand

what is more

WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF BEING FAMOUS?

Nowadays the magazines that sell the most are ones like Hello magazine, which tell us about the lives of famous people. It seems that everybody is interested in them, and that most people would really like to be famous. ________________ there are advantages and disadvantages.

_______________ of being famous is probably the lifestyle it gives you. Most famous people are very rich and can afford big houses with swimming pools, and expensive cars.  _____________, they spend a lot of time travelling, visiting different countries, and staying in luxurious hotels.

_____________, there are disadvantages. Every time famous people go out they are surrounded by fans and photographers. _____________, it is very difficult for them to have a normal private life. ______________, they often can´t spend much time at home as they have to travel so much, _______________ if they are making a film or doing a concert tour.

_____________________, I think it is probably easier to be happy if you are not famous, in spite of all the money famous people have.

Para escribir una buena redacción de "for and against":

• Escribe cuatro párrafos: introducción, puntos a favor, puntos en contra y una conclusión.
• Utilizad lenguaje formal, sin contracciones o expresiones coloquiales.
• Haced una lista de pros y contras antes de empezar la redacción.
• Ofreced siempre razones y ejemplos a vuestras ideas.
• Utilizad los conectores apropiados para enlazar párrafos y oraciones.

Por último, lanzaos a escribir la siguiente redacción, utilizando como ejemplo la anterior:

Write a "for & against" composition. The title is:

"What are the advantages and disadvantages of the public health service in your country?"